Friday 14 March 2014

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Dorothy

On Sunday my mum was making chocolate chip cookies.  My mum put the chocolate cookies in the cookie jar but when she lifted the lid there was a mystery world.  Mum jumped into the mystery world. There were spiders and bugs.  When she was at the bottom of the mystery world there she saw a little door.  She was too big to fit in the door but she found a cupcake that will make her shrink.  She went through the little door inside there was a dancing fork show.  Mum watched the dancing fork show until she grew back to normal size.

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Charlize

One day my mum was working in the shed but when she lifted the lid a mystery world appeared. She jumped into the mystery world, in the world there was a one hundred legged dog and cat.   She couldn't believe her eyes.  Someone called Panta Claus showed her to Santa claus.  Santa told her that her parents were secret agents and she had secret powers.  Santa claws said that she had to defeat the naughty man.  He was going to steal all the childrens presents in the world.  She thought for a moment then fought him with her secret powers. 

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Nene

On Saturday me and mum were making cookies.  I said "can I have some more sprinkles' but when she lifted the lid me and my mum got dragged in.  We saw a secret mystery world.  We wandered for a while then we saw some friendly elves dancing funky dance moves.  The elves showed a way to a castle.  In the castle they gave us lots of food to eat.  After they showed us the way home.  When we got home we had dinner straight away but the problem was I was so tired.

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Cruz

On Saturday I woke up, the mail man had been.  I went outside to check and it said to Cruz. I went back inside and made a hot chocolate.  But when I opened the envelope there was a world.  It dragged me inside, there were some cookies.  But first I had to talk to this elf.  She was very short and her name was Anna she was 70 years old.  I gave a container of cookies to her but when she lifted the lid there was just a spark.  I had no idea why, they were gone.  Then I saw my dog eating them, me and Anna laughed.

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Zara

My mum was baking cookies and they were done but when she lifted the lid she was being tugged suddenly she was dragged in.  She ended up in an enchanted forest, there were magical creatures. One of the unicorns told her how to get out.  She had to climb the tallest mountain to pick the prettiest pansy. It was heroic but she finally made it.  Now all she had to do was find the pansy and climb down to find a portal that leads back to the human world.  It took one or two weeks.  Then finally she found it.  She found the portal nearby, she smelt it and she appeared in the human world.

100WC - But when she lifted the lid...By Emily

One day mum was making some cookies and she put them in the jar.  She was waiting for them to cool down and when she went away the jar went pop! Mum walked back but when she lifted the lid she saw ice in it.  Then she asked the children "did you just put the ice in the jar?" They said "no".  She went back and continued making cookies.  She put them in the jar, then went somewhere in the house so they could cool down.  She came back to see the cookies, but when she lifted the lid they were gone. 

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Ryleigh

Once upon a time there was a little candy fairy and she owned a candy shop.  But the only thing that she had lost in her candy shop was the magic cookies. When any sort of candy was not very nice or any thing that was not tasty enough she would get very frustrated.  One day she was trying to get a very high box of candy.  When she saw a golden bottle she got up, but when she lifted the lid she found the magic cookies.  She was so happy and she also found a hole box of them too.

Wednesday 12 March 2014

100WC - But when she lifted the lid...by Kyel

On Monday morning my mum was baking cookies in the kitchen.  I told her to put extra extra extra sprinkles on and strawberries but when she lifted the lid  to the delicious sprinkles a dinosaur! jumped out at her and chased her around the house.  It broke through walls and made marks on the carpet. Then she called out and said "Kyel there's a dinosaur in the house".  We went running together outside.  The dinosaur kept running and bumped the wall.  Then the house crashed on it...imagine how scary that would be for you.  Then me and my mum said "Yay...we got it". And that was that.

Tuesday 4 March 2014

Daily 5 - Work on writing


Zara has been working on writing during Daily 5. She made a yummy recipe for kebabs. Well done Zara they sound yummy!!