Friday 14 March 2014

100WC - But when she lifted the lid - By Ryleigh

Once upon a time there was a little candy fairy and she owned a candy shop.  But the only thing that she had lost in her candy shop was the magic cookies. When any sort of candy was not very nice or any thing that was not tasty enough she would get very frustrated.  One day she was trying to get a very high box of candy.  When she saw a golden bottle she got up, but when she lifted the lid she found the magic cookies.  She was so happy and she also found a hole box of them too.
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  1. Anonymous17 March 2014 at 00:12

    Thanks Ryleigh - I like the way you have used the prompt here -the sweet shop setting works well. You have used a number of word choices to clarify- 'golden- magic' -add details to the nouns, and frustrated is a good choice. Remember this type of hole is spelt 'whole.'
    Mr Furlong Team 100-Norwich

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  2. Anonymous17 March 2014 at 19:43

    Love your story Ryleigh, especially since it's in a candy shop. Because I love candy too.
    Brendon (Dad)

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  3. Brendon17 March 2014 at 19:48

    Love your story Ryleigh, especially since it's in a candy shop.
    Because I love candy too.
    Brendon (Dad)

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